My favourite movie (complete this chart with your favourite movie). Look at my example with Phantom of the Opera
(Point) Out of hundreds of movies that I have watched, ________ is my favourite since. . . | Don’t start with a personal pronoun. “Phantom of the Opera” is my favourite movie of all time since the sensational stage sets and harmonious music turn this tragic love story into a musical spectacular - note: use quotation marks or italics for the movie title - make sure good adjectives are used |
Explanation#1: point form. “describe the storyline and how much you like it - Please include at least 2 points - use no more than one personal pronoun per point - start with IT statement or adjective or adverb or conjunction - I talk about the sound, music and costumes here. Need more explaining and description | - It is truly surprising that a love story begins with the deafening sound of the pipe organ in the opening scene of “Phantom”. This grabs the attention of all audiences at once as we all drop our jaws and wonder what may happen next. - The costumes all of the performers are eye popping as each one is colourful, unique and spectacular, similar to a New Year’s gala put together by Queen Elizabeth - one more explanation - |
Examples to support explanation#1 - try asking a question to make readers think | - How can a beautiful young singer fall in love with a disfigured genius who has been hiding in the water channelled basement for many years? Initially, this is not logical and does not make sense at all but as the story continues, as this fantasy love story evolves into a love-hate relationship that steals the attention of everyone. - As the dancers perform gracefully on the set, every eye in the theatre lock onto swinging chandelier above our heads |
Explanation#2: point form. - now, how is this movie better than the rest? - Please include at least 1 point - use no more than one personal pronoun per point - start with IT statement or adjective or adverb or conjunction | - On the other hand, some of the other musical movies put us the sleep within half an hour and the audience walk out of the movie theater - Sadly, those really bad movies ended up losing a of of money. Neither Netflix nor Disney+ want to put them on the streaming channels |
Examples to support explanation#2 | - describe one bad movie in the same catagory |
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