Wednesday 18 May 2022

May 18, 2022

 Can Money Buy Happiness oraganization chart

 

 

(Point) 

- what is happiness? Some consumable that will only last for a short period of time?

- can you buy love or friendship in real life? 

 

Don’t start with a personal pronoun. Some ideas: 

How can someone be happy if that person is broke, hungry and don’t have a place to stay at night? As everyone in the world works so hard everyday to earn a living so they can have a comfortable life. . . 

 

Imagine if you worry about making more money everyday and unable to relax, sleep or be happy? Then the excessive stress will cause many health problems that the millionaires must face for the rest of his/her life

- make sure good adjectives are used

- use conjuncations to explain

 

Explanation#1: point form, 

“sometimes, when tragedy hits, we can be really sad and depressed. A stack of money will not be able to support and comfort the lonely soul.”

provide a specific famous person who is wealthy but sad

https://www.goodtherapy.org/blog/10-famous-people-with-depression-0506187

 

- Please include at least 2 points

- use no more than one personal pronoun per point

- start with IT statement or adjective or adverb or conjunction

- think of an example that you can relate to that cause a lot of money to develeop (Tesla, green energy, space station)

Even if a billionaire is terminally ill, that wealthy individual cannot buy a liver or kidney for a transplant in Canada. He can stare with all the cash and gold bars inside his vault and continue to suffer in agony for a very long time. Who said money can buy happiness if the only thing that can be purchased is pain and suffering?

 

Without money, saving the planet with green energy will be impossible. Imagine if there are thousands of solar panels in the front yard of a school. Even with the brightest minds and ideas, with no money for research, no one can invent and install these devices and make the Earth a better place

- look at how much it cost Pfizer to develop the Covid vaccine or a Merck cancer treatment (Keytruda)

 

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Examples to support explanation#1

- try asking a question to make readers think

 

https://optimistminds.com/elvis-presley-depression/

 

 

what happened to those famous people who are sad? Some committed suicide, or they stay isolated for a very long time

- when they have less money, their friends disappear. Where is the true friendship or love?

_ Elvis’ depression

 

Explanation#2: point form. 

use another example to explain further

- Please include at least 1 point

- use no more than one personal pronoun per point

- start with IT statement or adjective or adverb or conjunction

 

 

- Disney’s World is known as the happiest place on earth, but without money, don’t even think of stepping your foot into the Magic Kingdom since it costs _____ for a one day ticket

- The only character who is happy is Mickey himself since he is counting all the Queen Elizabeth and Benjamin Franklin everyday to make you happy.

 

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