Monday, 28 March 2022

March 28, 2022

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Please finish the PEE essay on personality outfits by tonight. Send me your best paragraph (one paragraph) and I will mark it.

Clothing that represents my personality organizer: The PEE format

Each student should have a list of 5 personality words that describe themselves

 

(Point) The clothing that represents your personality:

 

Don’t start with a personal pronoun.

The Joker T-shirt that I adore best represents my personality since the sadness, loneliness and passive-aggressive behaviour seem to be hidden under that smiling face.

 

Explanation#1: point form. 

“describe the clothing item and how it is related to your personality”

- Please include at least 2 points

- use no more than one personal pronoun per point

- start with IT statement or adjective or adverb or conjunction

 

what appears to be a bunch of randomly drawn lines in a bright green background illustrates the multiple personalities under that laughter

- on the surface, Joker may seem cheerful and happy with his smile but in the matter of fact, he is a very depressed character who. . . 

- one more explanation

 

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Examples to support explanation#1

- try asking a question to make readers think

 

 

- Imagine when the class did not finish the assigned work during the weekend? On the surface, the teacher may be really upset, similar to the smutched makeup on Joker’s face. However, Mr. Kwok will be more than happy to offer extra help to those who need more time to complete what is required

 

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Explanation#2: point form. 

- now, what if you have to wear the same old boring school uniform everyday?

- Please include at least 1 point

- use no more than one personal pronoun per point

- start with IT statement or adjective or adverb or conjunction

 

 

- On the other hand, the boring navy blue school uniforms will not allow any of us to show our personality since. . . 

Examples to support explanation#2

 

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