Friday, 5 February 2021

Writing on Demand 4

 Either

Should March break be cancelled this year?

or

 Will students benefit from a two month summer holiday?


12 to 15 sentences, about 200 words, one paragraph




  • Most would like to have the March break

  • Students have March break every year. Have been working very hard since early January

  • Sad, depressing that students have to go to school non-stop from January till June

  • With everything that is happening around the world, we need to take a break and calm down

  • More time to volunteer online (e.g. attends hobbies, interest groups)

  • Bad for mental health: focus too hard and spend too much time on school work since January

  • Need time to relax and chill after a long, cold winter, and has been stuck at home all the time

  • During March break, people will hang out with each other. That may spread the virus in a much faster pace

  • Kwok is exhausted! I need to sleep, rest, exercise and stay fit during the break




  • Ask a question

  • It statement

  • Start with adverb (Undoubtedly, having a week off during March is a fantastic idea since it is a TDSB tradition for decades)

  • Start with conjunction: Although the virus may spread quickly during the break, it is necessary for us to gather only with the people in our household.

  • In order to recover quickly, . . .

  •  Use less personal pronouns

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